The background is good but the typo needs work. It's too large and it really doesnt fit the work. The typeogrphy is there as a compliment to the art as well as to add extra visual interest and most typically, a title or theme. Work on scalling it down and search to fit the text to the piece.
Overall, the rendering and colors are nice
>> Sometimes there is so much beauty in the world and I feel I cant take it anymore and my heart is going to cave in...